Your weight descends
upon the top of my head,
reaching into mind and brain
with luminous tendrils
of motherly love
and celestial command
in dizzying
orbital pirouettes,
a balloon riding
waves of solar wind
barely tethered to
a body or identity,
you push and pull
on our oceans
and minds high
in this early
summer heat,
quietly promising
to keep life churning,
keeping us company
without saying or
doing anything
but simply
being yourself,
teaching us all
a thing or two
about love.
Renee Novosel
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Copyright 2014
Thanks for following The Elephant – and wow: you write real good!!
Haha! Thank you and you’re welcome!
Lovely poem on missing out on so much…so true…leave for school or work just 30 mins earlier and walk real slow…you may catch the finch and smell the flowers. Thanks for dropping by my blog too. I am truly humbled, Oliana
Thank you likewise! 🙂
‘Orbital pirouettes’ love that 🙂
Thank you!
Welcome
This is a great metaphor because it was such an enrichment and a thrill to read before, during, and after “getting” it. And I agree with the point about love.
Thank you very much, Luke!
Last week I drew on this poem and the concept of the music of the spheres to write this poem for some young people I know:
Hi, Arthur Earth. I’m Merlin Moon.
Can I please help you play a tune?
What a great concept! Now I’m imagining a children’s book featuring the celestial friendship between the Earth and moon. Fantastic!