Maybe I was there.
Maybe you were there.
Maybe you and I
looked up at the stars
as the eyes
of infinite gods,
or the infinite eyes
of one god –
and we imagined
the possibilities.
Maybe we stood
at the feet of
rhythmic waves
as their rumbling
voices hinted
of secrets beneath
the arc of deep blue,
and we imagined
the possibilities.
Maybe there was
a time between lives,
before and after
everything was named,
when we witnessed
the ground beneath
our feet
and skies above
our eyes
without condition.
This meaning
without name,
value
without cost,
reverence
without judgement
is lost
when human eyes
are closed
and the blind
pursuit begins.
As if life’s beauty
itself isn’t enough
to satisfy
the reason
for being,
we shamefully define
that which
defies definition,
breeding foolish pride
with each steadfast
proclamation,
widening the rift
between man and nature.
Greed and power
construct the
revolving doors
of perceived reality,
keeping our
eyes on what
everyone else has
and our minds on
how badly we
want it,
but the universe
with its endless eyes
doesn’t blink
a single one
when we’ve
earned or
lost a million.
Our tiny order
doesn’t mean
a thing
when galaxies
collide.
Renee Novosel
All Right Reserved
Copyright 2014
Like this very much. May I reblog?
I’d be honored! Thank you.
Many thanks. 🙂
Solid. Love your perspective.
Thanks, Jason!
Reblogged this on Tales of Unwise Paths.
profound
Thank you very much. 🙂
Damn. This is nice.
Thank you so much!
Deeply beautiful and eloquent
Thank you very much, kind sir. 🙂
Very nice
Thank you, sir!
Always trying to get back to seeing the beauty of the universe with no conditions. Thank you for your beautiful words.
Thank you for your thoughtful reading. ♡
Major.
Thank you. 🙂
This resounds with a song by The Call back in the 80s. The title of it was When the Walls Came Down. It was a blockbuster that caused that whole scene to collapse and ushered in Grunge after the popsters had their fun imitating the 80s. We haven’t been on an upswing yet but I do believe this should be set to music.
The Castle Lady
After reading your comment I had a listen. Being born in 1980, I have clear and fond memories of this genre, however many of these memories lack adult perspective. Fantastic track. There’s such texture and richness to music with real meaning. Thank you for the flattering correlation and recommendation! I’ve always dreamed of writing for music …
Happy New Year’s eve, Castle Lady. ♡
Renee this is beautiful. And it’s been a long time since I came across such a creative writing blog that’s so honest–I’m smitten!!
Amy
Haha! Thank you so very much, Amy! You’re smitten and I’m blushing.
Hey, this poem was beautiful to read!
Thank you so much!
Wonderful! Thank you for sharing it with us 🙂
Thank you for reading! ☆
Elegant! Very nicely done. 🙂
Ron
Thank you very much, Ron!
I enjoyed this on many levels. I can see you didn’t wander aimlessly in your time between lives. This was old soul deep.
My flattery is beyond words. Thank you.
Hi. Thanks for the like and follow on my photography blog, but I’m going to follow you from here as this is where I occasionally don my ‘poet’ hat, such as it is. Love your writings.
Thank you likewise, sir! I’m a fan of hats. 😉
Omg my favorite I’ve read thus far
Thank you. 🙂
I love the honesty with which you write your poetry and your passion for words is evident. Thank you for the like and the follow. I am doing the same, but not out of gratitude – out of pure admiration for your work
Likewise, and one million thanks! Your writing is brilliant. Cheers!
The universe created humans.
We created humanity and people.
Inside the inside there’s an inside inside the inside of the inside of the inside surrounded the inside.
Too much focus inwards and life becomes one.
Looking out at it all and it all becomes alone.
Floating in space without a supporting mattress.
Gods play Asteroids as people load up Space Invaders.
Absolutely beautiful. Thank you. In the morning, when this searing headache has hopefully passed, I’ll have more to say. That’s a warning. 😉
Pick your duelling weapon and it’s on like Donkey Kong on Mean Bong Playing Songs In His Thong.
The Latin alphabet shall be wielded like throwing stars.
You will sit on my thrown :p.
😀
Hey buddy…
How did you connect with this spot? I need an outlet ..lol
Well, you can easily create a WordPress site! It seems you’ve created a profile already? I bought the .com from Hover, but you can do it all for free. Come over and I’ll help!